A young girl and her dad have had a busy morning shopping and now they plan to eat lunch at some outdoor seating. While the girl waits for her dad to collect their lunch from the take-away counter Ella sees a little bird with only one leg. He is hopping around looking for crumbs but the people on the busy street either ignore the tiny creature or worse the shout or growl. At the same time Ella sees a man - read these heartfelt words by Phil Cummings:
"A man with prickle whiskers, wild hair and his life in a bag on his back came weaving through the flow of the crowd. ... Ella watched as the man sat and hung his head. His laden shoulders slumped like the broken wings of a storm-weary bird."
This man clearly has nothing but in a beautiful moment, when the sparrow hops over close to the man looking for crumbs, he reaches into his pocket and pulls out a crumpled bag. He pours crumbs onto his palm and the tiny bird hops up and gently (a perfect choice of word) eats the cumbs.
Ella's father has also seen the man and so, when he has collected their lunch, he walks across to the man, stretches out his hand and then leads the man over to their table to share their meal.
This is a reassuring and compassionate story. The message in this book is clear but not heavy handed and the simple act of sharing lunch with a stranger will give readers room to imagine what might happen next.
The bird and the man both need food, and they are both obviously hungry and desperate, but the text has a quietness somehow, rather like the soft fog that surrounds the people in the street. The father and daughter clearly also have a very special relationship.
The text is spare but filled with meaning such as when the father smiles kindly and then simply helps the man over to their table. So little is said but so much is implied. I like the way Shane Devries gives the reader a different perspective as we look down on to the scene seeing the same view as the little bird. There are some exquisite phrases in this book – “a morsel was its gold”; “his life in a bag on his back”; “a smile shone from the deep shadows of his prickle-bush whiskers”. In the final illustration you can see Ella has given the man her scarf – a gesture which then gives the green spots on the end papers a much deeper significance.
The colour palette used in this book conveys a sense of cold and bleakness which is essential to the overall impact of the story – we need to feel the cold ourselves, to understand the full desperation of the bird and the man. The cold colour backdrop also acts as a visual metaphor for human ignorance that the man and bird contend with every day.
Crumbs was a CBCA (Children's Book Council of Australia) 2023 Notable title. I was a 2023 judge. We had over 200 books entered for this round of the award. Only 25 can reach the Notable list, then six on the short list and just one week ago the 2023 winners were announced. Check out my posts about My Strange Shrinking Parents; Paradise Sands; and Dirt by Sea.
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Shane Devries has illustrated another book by Phil Cummings - Boy. This book has been added to the prestigious IBBY Collection for Young People with Disabilities.
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Broken Beaks is in the library
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