Showing posts with label Poetry writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Poetry writing. Show all posts

Saturday, April 11, 2026

The Paperbark Tree Committee by Karys McEwan


"Being a teenager is all about swimming along with only your fin showing, trying to look like a shark, when really you're just an average fish. Never revealing you're not as brave as you look, never admitting that everyone else is in the same ocean. 
It's terrifying. And exhausting."

Art (Arthur) and his younger brother Hillary have moved with dad and his partner to Melbourne. Dad is a writer (of Young Adult fiction ironically) who rides an emotional roller-coaster of writer's block, breakthrough, doubt and insecurity. This means Dad is constantly distracted and has not formed any sort of real relationship with his two sons.

"We all know the stages of his writing by now - frustration when he can't think of an idea or has an idea he can't quite figure out, over-the-top joy when he finally settles on something, absence when he starts writing, grumpiness when he has writer's block, then mania when he's back on a roll, nervousness while he waits for feedback from his editor, and back and forth between those last few until the book is published. And then it's all the highs and lows of review and author talks, and then, lucky us, it starts all over again."

The main theme of this book is the exploration of the complexities of relationships. Art has a good relationship with his younger brother but as Art enters his teenage years there are of course some complications. Art also has a good relationship with his stepmother Sally, but there is his underlying fear that she might one day leave the family as his mother has done. 

Art works hard to make new friends - Micah and Lexi - at his new school in Melbourne and, even though it felt slightly contrived, it was interesting to see how, once he found two friends, he decided to be proactive and find more. The running scenes reminded me of the wonderful Tracks series by Jason Reynolds.

On the downside, as I said, Art has a very complex relationship with his distant and dysfunctional father. Sorry to say this but I just couldn't believe a parent, an adult, could be so deliberately unkind, uncommunicative and so insensitive towards his two sons and new partner. Dad's whole focus on being or becoming a famous writer, to my eye, portrayed a really really bad impression of that profession. 

The other relationship Art has to navigate is with the school bully - Jack. It always seems little too obvious to me when, as readers, we make the discovery that Jack comes from a dysfunctional family and that his own father is also a bully. I am sure this sadly is a real experience for some kids but after reading many hundreds of books that feature bullies, I do find this all a bit too predictable. 

Things I liked in this book: Art's relationship with Hillary - it is terrific to read about siblings who get on well with each other (albeit with some ups and downs); Sally the step mum is a fantastic character - wise and loving; and the final poem Art writes to perform with his after school writing group is emotional, truthful and worth thinking about deeply.

The CBCA judges mention emotional intelligence, and I thought about this too. It was good to see both boys were 'allowed to cry' and in the scene where Art tries to convince Hillary that they should trick their dad into proposing marriage to Sally; it is Hillary who shows enormous maturity when he talks about how this could badly hurt Sally. 

"I think this is the worst idea you've ever had ... By far. ... Dad won't go along with it. We'll get in huge trouble and Saly is just going to get hurt ... "

The title is not exactly a central focus of the story - Art and Hillary had a special tree in their former town and they used it to talk through their problems using the idea of a committee with an agenda. In Melbourne they find a new tree - a paperbark - but Art feels self-conscious when kids from his school see him climbing a tree like a little kid. Moving away from needing to use the tree to talk to each other links with the themes in this book of change and growing up. 

The CBCA selected 25 Younger Readers Notable titles (long list) for their 2026 award. Last week the short list of 6 were announced and I was utterly dismayed that FIVE of my predictions did not make the cut. I have seen The Paperbark Tree Committee in several shops since it was first released in April 2025 but the cover and blurb did not really grab my attention. 

Because this book is on the 2026 CBCA short list for Younger Readers I needed to read it (done) and then think about it perhaps a little more deeply than I usually do.

As an adult reader one plot point did not ring true for me. Art wants to 'get back at' Jack, the boy who has been bullying him. He sets up a plan with the help of his new friends to distract the librarian (why isn't she called a Teacher-Librarian) so he can get into the library or school computer system called Orbit. In NSW schools Orbit is one part of our library management system which is called Oliver. Orbit is the simple OPAC (online public access catalogue) designed for use by the younger students in a Primary school it is not part of the school administration software. I did hold my breath when Art tried to 'hack' the library circulation computer hoping to alter Jack's school records and I was glad when none of his attempts at guessing the password were successful. 

Generally, I only quote review comments that echo my own thoughts but here is the one from Readings (Melbourne bookshop) and I have to say I really disagree with their use of the word hilarious: 

The Paperbark Tree Committee is a gorgeous, heartfelt and hilarious tale of navigating change, bullying and growing up, and learning to appreciate loved ones for who they are.

Other reviews: Reading Time; The Book Muse; Read Plus; and Paperbark words an interview with Joy Lawn.

There are teaching notes on the publisher page but again I am going to say I think this book better suits an individual reader and I cannot imagine dissecting every scene/page/incident as part of a class novel study. 

Blurb from author page: Twelve-year-old Art and his younger brother Hilary are great friends, best friends. When they move to Melbourne from a small town in Queensland things seem to be easy for Hilary, who is still in primary school, but Art struggles to fit in, and he’s become a target for school bully Jack. His dad is too busy to give him much attention, but Art has his stepmum, Sally, who is always ready to listen. And there’s the paperbark tree. Art and Hilary climb into its branches and hold a secret meeting whenever they need to sort things out. The only problem is Art’s not sure he still wants to be part of the paperbark tree committee. He’s getting older and he thinks he needs to solve his problems on his own.

Here are the judges' comments:



Companion books:










Tuesday, December 30, 2025

The Trouble with Heroes by Kate Messner



Twelve weeks. 
46 peaks. 
Finish by Labor Day 
and all the charges go away.


A local youth has been arrested for vandalizing St. Mary’s Cemetery over the holiday weekend. Lake Placid Police responded to a complaint of someone kicking headstones shortly after 4:00 p.m. on Friday.

  • Why did Finn do this?
  • What will be the consequence?
  • What do we know about the grave?

School is not easy for Finn either. And now he is told he has to complete catch up work for English and PE. Here is his English assignment:

Poetry Project: What Makes a Hero?   Assignment: Draft, revise, and edit a collection of at least twenty poems about people you consider to be heroes. You may write about anyone who inspires you, living or dead. Your collection should begin with an introduction poem and must include at least five different poetic forms (haiku, sonnet, acrostic, concrete poem, found poem, riddle poem, erasure poem, free verse, magic 9, ode, pantoum, sestina, villanelle). Be sure to make use of poetic devices such as alliteration, onomatopoeia, similes, and metaphors. Have fun!

Finn's dad is famous in this town because there is a photo of him rescuing a girl after the tragedy of 9/11. Of course that was years ago. 

I see that photo in my sleep. 
Every detail. 
Dad’s black coat white with ash. 
His hair. 
His face. 
Like a statue carved in cold gray stone, 
lines chiseled in his forehead, 
around his eyes. 
Muddy tear streak down his cheek 
as he ran from the North Tower. 
He had a survivor! 
He was carrying her in those strong statue arms. 
Her leg was bleeding and she wore 
one red shoe, 
the other lost somewhere 
in the ashes, smoke, and screams.

The punishment for the vandalism is to climb 46 mountains. Finn is angry about his dad - but what has happened? You will adore meeting all the people who climb the mountains with Finn - they are compassionate and wise and quietly help him to make sense of his life and his personal tragedies. Oh and the dog is wonderful! I also loved the way Kate Messner structured this story. 

You will NOT be able to put this book down. It is such a page turner. Highly recommended for readers aged 10+.

Blurb from the author page: Finn Connelly is nothing like his dad, a star athlete and firefighter hero who always ran toward danger until he died two years ago. Finn’s about to fail seventh grade and has never made headlines . . . until now. Caught on camera vandalizing a cemetery, he’s in big trouble for kicking down some dead old lady’s headstone. But it turns out that grave belongs to a legendary local mountain climber, and her daughter makes Finn an unusual offer: climb all forty-six Adirondack High Peaks with her dead mother’s dog, and they can call it even. In a wild three months of misadventures, mountain mud, and unexpected mentors, Finn begins to find his way on the trails. At the top of each peak, he can see for miles and slowly begins to understand more about himself and his dad. But the mountains don’t care about any of that, and as the clock ticks down to September, they have more surprises in store. Finn’s final summit challenge may be more than even a hero can face.

Here are some text quotes:

She’s the prosecutor in charge of my case. There might not be a court appearance after all, she says, and I’m so relieved I miss what comes next but I snap to attention when she rattles off the price of the headstone I busted: $2,600 for a weathered hunk of rock.

It’s called PTSD. (That’s Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder, in case you’re wondering.) But if you’re a 9/11 firefighter’s kid you already know those letters, learned them with your ABCs, when you learned not to ask questions in September. When you learned how to make your own lunch and sign your own permission slips, and pretend everything was all right.

Some Awards:

  • New York Times Bestseller
  • USA Today Bestseller
  • National Indie Bestseller
  • Publishers Weekly Best Books of 2025
  • School Library Journal Best Books of 2025
  • Kirkus Best Books of 2025
  • Chicago Public Library Best of the Best Books, 2025
  • 2026-2027 Texas Bluebonnet List Nominee
  • 2026 Charlotte Huck Honor
  • 2026 NCTE Notable Novels in Verse
  • Best Kids’ Books about Mental Health 2025, Child Mind Institute

As I read this book, I was in awe of Messner’s skill. She combines so many disparate elements into a book that feels organic and beautiful. Her use of a verse novel format makes so much sense here, allowing us to feel what Finn does even as he is in denial about much of it. His poetry project weaves its way through the verse, capturing his voice and rage. Finn can’t see himself through most of the book, can’t see the people around him and their support, can’t see his father and the truth about him, can’t find his way through. This is a book about what nature can do for a person who is lost and not looking to be rescued. It is a book about the various ways that heroes enter our lives, the forms they take that are unexpected and sometimes drooling dogs, the connection that can result in shared experiences. It is about so much at once and yet again, is superbly focused and deftly written.  Waking Brain Cells

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Friday, September 12, 2025

Out of Wonder: Poems celebrating poets by Kwame Alexander illustrated by Ekua Holmes


"Allow me to introduce you to twenty of my favourite poets. ... Enjoy the poems. We hope to use them as stepping stones to wonder, leading you to write, to read the works of the poets celebrated in this book, to seek out more about their lives and their work, or to simply read and explore more poetry."

This book celebrates the work of twenty very famous poets in a unique way with tribute poems written by Kwame Alexander, Chris Colderley and Marjory Wentworth using the style, tone and form of the original.



This book would be a fabulous resource for a High School English class. 

A magnificent exploration of the poetic imagination. Kirkus Star review

There are three sections: The first section looks at poets who developed singular styles in their writing that poetry lovers have grown to recognize e.g. ee cummings. The second section celebrates poets who beautifully capture everyday moments. The final section serves as a tribute to the poets who have written poems that delight the authors. Take a look at the trailer. This book was published in 2017. My copy was a gift from a friend. The retail price of this book is sadly over AUS$40 but you might find a copy in a library. 

A wonderfully diverse collection of writers and poems, brought to life with color collages by Caldecott honoree Ekua Holmes.  The second paragraph of Kwame Alexander’s preface would make a perfect introduction to a study of poetry, and the entire book could be used as a curriculum guide to introduce students to 20 different poets. Kids Book a Day

This book contains a tribute to William Carlos Williams so I thought I would share my own favourite poem by William Carlos Williams that you may know:

This is Just to Say
by William Carlos Williams

I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox

and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast

Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold


Awards for Out of Wonder:
  • Library Guild Selection
  • Parents' Choice Awards Gold Award
  • New York Public Library's 100 Best Books for Kids
  • Chicago Public Library Best of the Best Books
  • Evanston Public Library: 101 Great Books for Kids list
  • Boston Globe Best Children's Books of the Year 2017
  • Center for the Study of Multicultural Children's Literature's Best Books List
  • Kirkus Reviews Best Books of the Year
  • NCTE Notable Poetry Books List
  • Cybils Award, Poetry Finalist
  • Coretta Scott King Illustrator Book Award Winner
  • ALA Notable Children's Books
  • Bank Street College of Education Best Children’s Books of the Year

Kwame Alexander is a poet, educator, and author of twenty-one books for children and educators, including Acoustic Rooster and His Barnyard Band, Surf’s Up, Booked, and a middle-grade novel in verse, The Crossover, which was awarded the 2015 Newbery Medal. He is currently the poet laureate of LitWorld, a K-6 literacy organization dedicated to supporting the development of literacy in the world's most vulnerable communities. He lives in Virginia.

Ekua Holmes is a fine artist whose work explores themes of family, relationships, hope, and faith. The first children’s book she illustrated is Carole Boston Weatherford’s Voice of Freedom: Fannie Lou Hamer, which was a Caldecott Honor Book and a Robert F. Sibert Honor Book and for which she also won the John Steptoe New Talent Illustrator Award. Ekua Holmes lives in Boston.

Here is the table of contents:




Part I, titled “Got Style?”, offers us six poems, written in the styles of Naomi Shihab Nye, Robert Frost, e. e. cummings, Bashō, Nikki Giovanni, and Langston Hughes. It is a great idea indeed to start with a style focus like this; these poets have particularly distinct styles, and the six poems honoring them manage to showcase to the young reader what possibilities exist for poetic form.

Part II, titled “In Your Shoes”, celebrates Walter Dean Myers, Emily Dickinson, Terrance Hayes, Billy Collins, Pablo Neruda, Judith Wright, and Mary Oliver with seven poems that explore themes and contexts that come directly from these poets’ own works.

Part III, titled “Thank You”, includes seven more poems, this time explicitly thanking and celebrating Gwendolyn Brooks, Sandra Cisneros, William Carlos Williams, Okot p’Bitek, Chief Dan George, Rumi, and Maya Angelou.




Thursday, June 12, 2025

The Final Year by Matt Goodfellow illustrated by Joe Todd Stanton



that next year will be tough ...
that it's time to knuckle down and focus
that it's all worth it in the end
that it's the most important year of our 
lives so far and we need to act like it ...
that it's time for us to step up and become top of the school
that it's the final year.

You can feel the tone of this writing from this extract near the beginning of the book. It feels a little like a rap song:

See the take-aways and neon-washed litter?
The disfigured pigeons 
huddled under railway bridges and flyovers?
Taxis buses pizza-boxes vape shops?
This is not a place of labradors and lattes and electric Audis
this is a place of staffies and cider
and exhaust-pipe smoke,
a place of one foot in front of the other brother
cos what else ya goona do?

Nathan Wilder (Nate) has two brothers, Dylan aged nearly four and Jaxon aged eight, and each of them has a different dad. Mum had Nate when she was just seventeen. Money is very short but mum is sure she can win at the bingo. Mum also likes to drink. Nate didn't ever meet his dad he just knows his name was Nick and he looks a little like Jesus. Jaxon's dad was a bully and a bouncer and he liked beer, lots of beer. He is now in jail. No one is sure about Dylan's dad. Dylan loves spiderman and he a kid always on the move. Nate loves his brothers, but Nate is also battling his own very serious anger issues. 

Early on we discover, just four little words my pile of books to show Nate is a reader (and a writer). Nate sleeps in the lounge room of their tiny flat - how does a kid like this have books? Why are the books hidden? Later we read "when I need to chill I head to the library." and "I've read everything I can find by David Almond. ... His style like music like poetry." Nate especially loved The Colour of the Sun. (I have added it to my own to read list). Then joy of joys the book his Grade 6 class will study is Skellig.




Notice the title - The Final Year. It is the final year of Primary. Nate has one great mate Parker Smith or PS. But when the new classes are formed the friends are separated. PS seems to have perfect life. Clean house, parents with jobs, food - regular stuff. Nate on the other hand has, in some ways, become a parent to his two young brothers.

Mum's out cold still
the morning after Bingo
so I get the boys ready
like I've done a thousand times before.

At the end of Gade 5 Nate and his class visit the room where they will go next year:

The classroom 
belongs to the old Year 6
stinks of 'em
and I mean stinks.
Their fadin name-tags are peeling off drawers
their work is all over the walls

Nate gets the new teacher Mr Joshua. He has no idea but this is so wonderful. Mr Joshua may be very inexperienced, but he is so wise and he offers gentle and caring support to Nate. He also loves to include music into his classroom which made me cheer. 

The other issue at school is Turner - the school bully and his gang. And now PS seems to be friends with Turner. 

Turner's no learner
he'll fight and he'll burn ya
he's done things that can't be forgiven.
Turner man, Turner
those fists gonna earn ya
a stay in triangular prison.

It is heart breaking to witness the disintegration of the friendship between Nate and PS. Thank goodness for his new friend Caleb. Then everything changes because Dylan is really unwell - seriously very very unwell. You will gasp over these scenes.

How can my head
be so full of stuff, Sir
so full of sadness
so full of questions
so full of danger
so full of pain
yet I am so empty?

Here is a description from their journey to the school camp in Windermer:

As we get closer
the hills are whiter than they looked
snow everywhere
like someone's laid down feathers
on the shoulders of a new world.

This book will break your heart and then mend it again. Please try to find this book and read it then give it to your young readers aged 10+ or pop it on display in your school library. This is one of those truly special books that needs to be in the hands of readers. This might be my book of the year. Teachers will love Mr Joshua and also the subtle commentary about the idiocy of state testing of our students - hooray! When you share this book make sure you find the music for "Every little things gonna be all right" (Bob Marley) and play it with the sound up LOUD. Here are some very detailed teaches notes. Matt Goodfellow introduces his book.

Carnegie shadow judges' notes say:

The Final Year is about …

 • The importance of friendship
 • How it is possible to control your anger
 • The power of writing
 • Putting family above everything else
 • How teachers can be inspirational
 • Growing up
 • How tough life is for some young people
 • Putting a brave face on things
 • The importance of kindness




Next step for me is to find the sequel published early in 2025 because the final words of The Final Year are ... 



Companion book:


Motormouth (now out of print but is sure to be in many Australian school libraries)


Wednesday, May 15, 2024

Rain by Anders Holmer

Bookseller blurb: This haiku collection will enchant both nature lovers and budding poets. The spare, lyrical text describes a series of short vignettes, each of them taking place in a different kind of rain, from thunderstorms to falling flower petals. The poems 'some serious, some gently humorous' depict scenes from all over the globe: a horse struggling to plow a field, a father changing a tire while his children play, and two friends making up after a fight. 

Koja Agency: Rain has just fallen, a baby tooth is loose, a beetle stands up soaked and dazed on the gravel, a mole is lurking underground while a guy on a horse gets a phone call from his grandmother. In other places the snow is melting, and the butterflies soon expected to arrive. Today’s paper is dropped from a suspension bridge and two best friends forget to be angry when a rain of flowers falls. On the overall theme of rain, this book depicts different magnificent and extraordinary places around the world. Each spread represents a new world full of subtle details and ingenious humor. Anders Holmer portrays in his unique way what is going on in that moment in that specific place. Short haiku texts accompany the grandiose spreads.

Yesterday was my third visit to one of our large chain bookstores. They have a number of sale tables filled with children's books acquired by the store before 2019. Every time I visit, I pick up another book or two. There are still heaps of treasures on these tables. My friend from Kinderbookswitheverything picked up nine splendid titles. I will talk about some of these once she puts them into her school library and I can borrow them. We BOTH picked up this book because luckily there were two copies Retail price AUS$28.50 bargain price $14.25 - and two copies have been on the shop shelf since December 2018. Maybe no one picked it up because they read this very negative review from a Swedish newspaper? 

In contrast this book gained a Kirkus Star review: While these poems do not strictly follow all the characteristics of haiku, they do evoke different moods, such as the gathering darkness of a crocodile swamp. They also break stereotypes by juxtaposing technology and rural life—a cellphone rings amid a group of bareback riders galloping across a steppe. Most of all, they invite readers to pore over each colorful, expressive illustration to discover visual clues contained in the spare verse. A unique read-aloud that blends world cultures, poetic form, and natural splendor.

On each rainy spread, life happens in haiku, with all its cultural variety and complexity: A crane observes two children resolving a quarrel, a goatherd wiggles a loose tooth while surveying the flock, a lighthouse keeper discovers an unmoored boat as puffins glide by, rangers monitor a dying forest fire while creatures scurry away, and travelers with llamas climb a steep hillside, stopping for a beetle in their path. Visual details encourage readers to learn more about the countries of origin of the peoples and animals depicted throughout. School Library Journal (quoted by Barnes and Noble)

Okay - begin with the cover and title - Rain. If you look closely you can see rain or snow falling on this young Inuit child and his or her reindeer. But then think about rain and rein. Now flip to the back cover. You will discover this is a book of haiku poems. Each page can almost stand alone. A brilliant resource for teachers looking to inspire their students to write poetry in this beautiful form. This book is a book of poetry or course, but it also fits into my new category of Poetry with Pictures - these are picture books with no narrative.

My favourite page has puffins AND a lighthouse. To be honest this is probably why I bought this book. Here is the text from that page:

Slowly the boat drifts,
drifts away from the lighthouse -
never tied it up.

I also love the image on the page with a group of people (probably in Bolivia) trekking up a mountain with their alpacas only to be stopped by a tiny beetle.

Half-awake and drenched,
a beetle stand guard in the
middle of the path.

Rain is titled Regn in Swedish. It was published in 2018 so is sadly out of print. His debut book was It Happens! (2017). 


Anders Holmer is a Swedish architect, artist and author living in Gothenburg. He has been writing and illustrating children's books since 2017. His haiku album, Rain, was shortlisted for the ALMA Prize, Sweden's most prestigious children's literature award. In 2018, Anders Holmer's work was selected for the art exhibition at the New York Society of Illustrators. 

About Farewell (also translated as Leave): After a sad conversation with her mother, a child sets off on a long journey strewn with pitfalls, an imaginary journey inspired by the elements that populate her daily life. Along the way, she collects different objects, using a butterfly net: cloud, trumpet or diamond. From these, she makes something even more precious. When she returns, she is ready to be herself again.

About Utflykt (Excursion): In Anders Holmer's new picture book, we meet two children who saunter around in enigmatic fantasy landscapes. One is snuffy and sure of what he is doing, and the other is more questioning about what is going on. They try out different identities and take on different guises. You and I and the world are mixed together. We hear the echo of an adult's voice. Existential comedy ensues when they take on a concept they don't fully understand: Excursion. A celebration of children's ability to create hopeful playfulness and make sense of the world. A metaphor of how we in our lives grope for comprehensibility but instead have to accept that not everything can be understood, and that it is also okay. Maybe we won't be any wiser, but we'll have fun along the way.


Monday, February 5, 2024

Right as Rain by Lindsey Stoddard




"That day, with my nails still full of dirt I swore to myself I'd never bury anything that deep again. But that was ten years ago, when my parents laughed and talked to each other in normal tones. 
When we were a family of four. Before that night."

Change is hard. Don't be sorry.
Be something great while you are still so young.

Counting is what I do when I want to erase my brain ...

The events of 'that night' are presented in this story as alternate and flashback chapters. As a reader you gradually work out something truly terrible has happened 350 days ago and now the family are moving from Vermont to New York City where mum has a new job. Every mention of Rain's brother Guthrie is in the past tense. His room has been shut tight for 350 days. Dad has retreated to the bedroom. 

"His hair is sticking up on one side, his beard is grayer and scruffier and longer than I've ever seen it, and his flannel shirt is off by a button."

Rain has to leave behind her home, her room and her very best friend. She may also have lost the chance to compete as a runner and she is so fast she could have been the winner. 

"One in four. That's the same odds as marriages that survive the death of a child."

Their new home is a tiny apartment and right from the start Rain knows someone else lived there - a girl who was Frankie's best friend. How can there possibly be a way Rain and Frankie can ever be friends. And the new school is huge and loud and:

"Students need to complete twenty-five hours of community service before June eighteenth to be promoted to seventh grade."

The teacher does reduce the requirement to ten hours but this still means Rain has only eighteen days to complete this assignment. Luckily, she does make friends with Frankie and also with a quiet, but very kind girl in her class, named Amelia. Rain and her mum volunteer to make lunches at a local church and this gives Rain a first-hand experience of homelessness. And there is a wonderful neighborhood center near their homes and the three girls go there as volunteers. The owner Ms Dacie is a very special lady who provides safety and kindness for everyone, but her lease is about to expire and there is no money to keep her center open.   

Ms Dacie's place has a large overgrown garden off to the side. Before everything changed Rain's dad was a very keen and very successful gardener. Rain puts these ideas together and she comes up with a wonderful way to involve the community, help her dad (and Mum) and save Ms Dacie's safe space. Meanwhile the class teacher has set a poetry assignment (which made me link this book to Ode to a Nobody). And of course Frankie, Rain and Amelia are competing in the relay at the track meet against kids in Grade eight - the are only in Grade six. 



Right as Rain has very heavy themes but it is all told with a lightness of touch and small moments of sweet humour such as when Rain uses forbidden words (damn, shut-up, and stupid) and when she eats wonderful new Mexican foods in her neighborhood and drinks the world's most delicious hot chocolate. There are also truly special moments of kindness in this story and also emotional intelligence. 

You might also like to read or reread The One and Only Ivan; Bridge to Terabithia and The Crossover (Kwame Alexander) before dipping into Right As Rain as these are the library books that Rain is reading through her first weeks at this new school. 

Poem 4

363 days gone
1 Christmas
4 gardening seasons
3 report cards
55 ski runs
51 Friday family dinners
3 pairs of worn-out sneakers that have run through, run away, run to erase
the length of 130,680 songs that I've counted in my head,
wondering,
if maybe you could just still be there, at the concert
listening.
The number of our memories together between now and the dirt is 
a big who-knows.
But I won't let those sneak off and out.
And if they try, I promise. Promise. I'll say no stay. 

Sunday, January 28, 2024

Ode to a Nobody by Caroline Brooks DuBois

 



If Forest was the glue
binding the family 
then I am the heat
weakening the bond.

If Forest was the duct tape,
the button, the magnet, the bungee
holding us together,
then I am the resistance
the yank, the pull.

Quinnie, Quinn, Quinn(ie) 

Mom's ultrasound and intuition
convinced her
I was born to be a boy.
So my parents chose a name
and for nine long months
called me Quinn.

When I turned out a girl,
Mom still liked Quinn.
'It's gender-neutral,'
she insisted.

Dad disagreed
and has always called me
Quinnie. So it's Quinn on paper,
but out loud mostly Quinnie
and sometimes Quinn,
depending on 
who's speaking.

Quinnie's brother is the star of the family, at least according to his sister. Mum and dad keep fighting. Quinnie is sure that is all her fault. And then the tornado hits.

It's been a week
since the tornado struck.
I swear time has crawled.
It could be lack of electricity
in our busted home, or moving to Ivy-
days of doing things I've never done,
and all the time spent offline.
Maybe it's just me,
or maybe it's the truce
between Mom and Dad.
But I've changed a lot in the span
of this 'week-year'.

In class Ms Koval sets an assignment of poetry writing for the whole month. They study famous poems and learn techniques. Reading the poems by Quinnie we gain insights into her family issues, friendship issues, her worries, and the way Quinnie learns how to stands up to her old friends who want her to do dangerous things. 

In one incident Jack and Jade spray paint damaged houses but when the spray tins are left in Quinnie's pack she has a wonderful idea. She writes poems of hope on neighborhood walls as she watches all the people who suffered from the tornado begin to rebuild their lives. 

Stay strong.
We survived!
Hold that vibe.
Hear the song.
Of lives resuming
And hope blooming.

After a month of writing Quinn reads her best poem to the class. Jack kept saying this poetry writing project was a waste of his time but then he slips his poem into her pocket. It has been a year of change but there will be good times to come. You are sure to shed a few tears when you read the final scenes. 

Take a close look at the cover of this book. The town is hit by a tornado - hence the flying objects; Quinn and her mum shelter in the basement but she forgets to rescue her hamster named Pumpkin; Jack was Quinn's best friend and they liked to skate and game but now Jade has arrived and this precious friendship has shifted.



Straight ater I read Ode to Nobody I read Right as Rain (not a verse novel) - these books have very similar themes (parents on the brink of divorce; poetry writing; school life; friendship) so I have found myself mixing up the plot points. I will talk about this book over the coming days.



Saturday, January 27, 2024

Singing with Elephants by Margarita Engle

 

Brilliant, joyful, and deeply moving. Kirkus Star review


Publisher blurb: Cuban-born eleven-year-old Oriol lives in Santa Barbara, California, where she struggles to belong. But most of the time that’s okay, because she enjoys helping her parents care for the many injured animals at their veterinary clinic. Then Gabriela Mistral, the first Latin American winner of a Nobel Prize in Literature moves to town, and aspiring writer Oriol finds herself opening up. And when she discovers that someone is threatening the life of a baby elephant at her parents’ clinic, Oriol is determined to take action. As she begins to create a world of words for herself, Oriol learns it will take courage and strength to do what she thinks is right—even if it means keeping secrets from those she loves.

The baby elephant mentioned in this blurb is a twin. An unscrupulous actor who seeks fame at any cost takes one of the two-week-old baby elephants away from its mother. Oriol is determined to find the baby. She feels the grief of the mother and remaining twin very deeply. Once she finds little Song (his sister is Dance) Oriol then needs to spring into action. She organises a petition and with the help of Gabriela Mistral letters are written to other famous actors and to the Humane society. There must be a way to save this tiny elephant and stop the cruel intentions which would force her to perform in unnatural ways. 

Here are a few text quotes to give you a flavour of this verse novel:

My bird name
musical and sweet,
is one I chose 
for myself, long ago, in Cuba
when I knew who I was
and how 
to speak.

ELEPHANT ANATOMY

Standing in front of Chandra
I'm stunned into silence.
Tree-root feet.
Half-moon toenails.
Map-of-India ears.
Paintbrush tail.
A snake-shaped nose
with forty-thousand
muscles.
Her fifty pound heart pulses with love
for her soon-to-be newborn.
She's been pregnant for twenty-two months,
due any day.
She needs to eat three hundred pounds of hay
every twenty-four houses.
When she moves
she's as graceful
as a swaying
ocean wave.

MY FUTURE IS BLURRY (extract)

Gabriela Mistral is right-
I cannot predict the future,
but I can imagine a time
when wild animals
are no longer held captive
My words and actions
have shown me what
is possible.
Maybe the will change
the whole world
someday.


Add this book to your list of verse novels to share with young readers aged 10+ up to age 13. 


I met Margarita Engle at a USBBY conference a few years ago so when I saw this verse novel in The Little Bookroom (Melbourne bookstore) I grabbed it.

Have you heard of Gabriela Mistral (1889-1957) - the first Latin winner of a Nobel Prize for Literature? I had not heard of her but there are details at the back of Singing with elephants along with one of her poems.

"I wanted to imagine how she might have influenced a child ... so I invented a Cuban immigrant girl who loves animals and nature as much as Mistral."

"She believed children deserved kindness, and her reforms of rural education became a model for all Latin America. At the same time she became a world-famous poet, and served as a diplomat, representing the government of Chile while living in various countries. .... (She) was an influential peace activist (and one) of the founders of the League of Nationals and later UNICEF."

Awards:

  • Rhode Island 2024 Children's Book Award Nominee
  • Bank Street 2023 Best Children's Books
  • New York Times Best Children’s Books of 2022
  • Kirkus Best Middle Grade Books 2022
  • School Library Journal-26 MG Books for Latinx Heritage Month 2022
  • Nerdies Award, 2022
  • Cybils Award Finalist
  • School Library Journal Mock Newbery Suggestions
  • Kirkus Starred Review
  • Junior Library Guild Selection
  • New York Times review
  • NPR Morning Edition interview
  • Publishers Weekly starred review
Margarita Engle is the author of these (Summer Birds is a firm favourite of mine).





Saturday, November 18, 2023

How to Write a Poem by Kwane Alexander and Deanna Nikaido illustrated by Melissa Sweet

 


"Close your eyes, open the window of your mind and climb out, 
like a seedling reaching for tomorrow."


Every word of this book is liquid gold - plan to read this aloud before your group of students begin their writing - poetry or prose.

Kwame says: "A poem is a small but mighty thing. It has the power to reach inside, to teach us, to ignite our imaginations. Now more than ever, children need a surefire way to channel their emotions, build their confidence and discover the world and their place in it. Poetry, with its simplicity, with its accessibility and rhythm, can do all these things instantaneously."

Melissa Sweet says: "This collage art was made with vintage and handmade papers, paint, pencils, printed letterforms, and beach pebbles."

I want to say run into your school library and ask/demand that the Teacher-Librarian buys this book but in reality here in Australia this wonderful book is very expensive. I have friends who work in NSW schools who have such small library budgets - so this book is not one they could ever consider acquiring. I have looked at a range of online and store front sellers and the price of this book varies between $30 and $44. I guess very few school libraries will be able to purchase this book but perhaps you will find it in a local library or you could view the ebook version. 

Marvelously crafted to inspire blooming writers. Kirkus Star review

Here are other books about writing poetry:




Kwame Alexander is a poet, educator, producer and #1 New York Times bestselling author of 39 books, including Why Fathers Cry at Night, An American Story, The Door of No Return, Becoming Muhammad Ali (co-authored with James Patterson), Rebound, which was shortlisted for the prestigious UK Carnegie Medal, and The Undefeated, the National Book Award nominee, Newbery Honor, and Caldecott Medal-winning picture book illustrated by Kadir Nelson.

Companion volume:



Look for these too all illustrated by Melissa Sweet: